A detailed, dark yet poetic scene illustrating the metaphorical 'road to paradise.' The road appears long and winding, surrounded by a surreal, almost ethereal landscape. The sun shines brightly, and rainbows seem to dance on the breeze, yet the path itself is littered with broken stars, scars, and memories. A lone figure walks this road, appearing weary and burdened, as if tripping over these remnants of the past. The atmosphere is a juxtaposition of light and dark, with the 'new day' portrayed with a sense of ironic brightness that contrasts with the figure's pain. The background blends into a soft, dreamlike horizon, while the foreground is stark, symbolizing the contrast between the promise of paradise and the enduring pain of the journey.

They say it’s a long road to paradise,
And oh, how I feel the pain.
But don’t worry, they tell me,
“Everything’s different now,” they explain.

Yes, of course, the sun shines brighter,
And rainbows dance on the breeze,
But funny how this “new day”
Still knocks me to my knees.

The road’s supposed to be smoother,
Not paved with memories and scars,
But here I am, tripping over
The same old broken stars.

“Don’t you feel better?” they ask,
With their smiles so wide and fake,
As if their cheery words alone
Could fix what’s left in my wake.

Oh yes, I feel so different,
A brand new man, can’t you see?
Except for this tiny little fact
I’m still carrying me.

So I’ll walk this road to paradise,
Pretending the pain’s a game,
Because though things have “changed,” my friend,
I still hurt just the same.



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